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diff --git a/notes/23_06_2026.txt b/notes/23_06_2026.txt new file mode 100644 index 0000000..b5b8075 --- /dev/null +++ b/notes/23_06_2026.txt @@ -0,0 +1,19 @@ +Try to make the demo after slide 7 so that it shows Kafka and Postgres receive data from the real datacenter. +Just to show things are connected. +Consider showing the experiment with alarms live. +Figure 1.5 is fine. +Change the caption to figure 1.5, it cannot be just another text-box i.e., make it _less_ informative overall. +Caption 1.5 -> visualisation of the digital twin. +Currently the caption 1.5 is NOT the description of the figure. +TODO("Change caption 1.5. Captions should be shorter, figure descriptions should be in captions, at most one line description if you _really_ want to have it in the caption.") + +Make the "Solution - use a 2nd simulator" green instead. +Change the "how did you solve the problem" into green. +Keep the upper cloud ("the problem") red. + +Align figure 1.5 better --> do not make the lower part of the figure moved to the left. +Change the figure 1.5 so that it is aligned vertically. + +In your figure it is not clear that what you see on the top is the problem. +The second thing is too similar to the first thing in the figure. +If you align that perfectly (the first thing and the second thing), align everything, AND you add some clear some arrow, it becomes more clear that "this is an implementation of that". |