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 \section{Thesis Contributions}\label{s:thesis-contributions}
 
+\subsection{Conceptual Contributions}\label{ss:conceptual_contributions}
+
+
+\begin{enumerate}[label=\emph{C\textsubscript{\arabic*}}, align=left, labelsep=0pt]
+	\item We conduct a systematic literature review and detailed analysis of existing \gls{dcdt}'s in the scientific community.
+	      We collect and organize the \gls{dcdt}'s characteristics and based on our findings we propose a unified system model of the design space.
+	\item We propose the design of a discrete-event \gls{dcdt} for reliable and timely failure prediction in datacenters.
+	      The conceptual design of the predictive \gls{dcdt} proposes a set of system components which leverage operational data analysis and discrete-event simulation.
+\end{enumerate}
+
+\subsection{Technical Contributions}\label{ss:technical_contributions}
 
 \begin{enumerate}[label=\emph{C\textsubscript{\arabic*}}, align=left, labelsep=0pt]
-	\item An open-source \gls{dcdt} prototype for predictive facility maintenance, with data analysis supported by in-band and out-of-band telemetry and discrete-event simulation.
-	\item Extensive evaluation and validation experiments of the system.
-	\item Demonstration of the \gls{dcdt} in pair with a simulated datacenter.
+	\item We prototype \gls{my_system} following the established \gls{dt} design principles using discrete-event simulation and \gls{oda}.
+	\item We evaluate the predictive \gls{dcdt} prototype using a novel experimentation technique and datacenter workload traces from the industry.
+	      We design a method to evaluate \gls{dcdt}'s without the overhead of real-world computation, conduct a set of experiments and analyse the results.
 \end{enumerate}
 
 \section{Plagiarism Declaration}\label{s:plagiarism-declaraion}