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@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ We propose that digital twinning can be enhanced by integrating predictive analy
 \noindent We divide the problem of designing a predictive \gls{dcdt} into three research questions:
 \begin{enumerate}[label=\emph{RQ\textsubscript{\arabic*}}, align=left, itemsep=0pt]
 	% First research question stolen from Capelin by Georgios Andreadis and adapted to my work.
-	\item \emph{How capture and assess the current state-of-the-art of digital twinning for datacenters?}\\
+	\item \emph{How to assess the current state-of-the-art of digital twinning for datacenters?}\\
 	      There is currently a lack of a unified system model of what constitutes a \gls{dcdt}, and the differences between existing \gls{dcdt} deployments.
 	      It is necessary that we establish a common model of a \gls{dcdt} in the research community.
 	      We must develop a holistic \gls{dcdt} model that factors in the necessary components of a \gls{dt}.
@@ -112,11 +112,15 @@ We propose that digital twinning can be enhanced by integrating predictive analy
 %We conduct a review of literature of closely-related fields as well as separate engineering science such as aerospace engineering.
 % This will aid in identifying the most important use-cases for digital twins and in return, the crucial functional and non-functional requirements.
 % We analyze the found use-cases in the context of datacenters or brainstorm how we can adapt them to datacenters.
-To answer \emph{RQ\textsubscript{1}} we conduct a standard literature review as proposed by \textit{Kitchenham et al.} \cite{DBLP:journals/infsof/KitchenhamPBBTNL10} along with the guidance of the supervisor.
-Firstly, we specify the review research questions and determine the right review method.
-Secondly, we conduct the review and find the potential datacenter digital twin use-cases.
-This includes summaries of a selection of relevant articles and their findings.
-Lastly, based on the found use-cases, we formulate the functional and non-functional requirements for the predictive \gls{dcdt} reference architecture.
+To answer \emph{RQ\textsubscript{1}} we conduct a literature review as proposed by \textit{Kitchenham et al.} \cite{DBLP:journals/infsof/KitchenhamPBBTNL10} along with the guidance of the supervisor.
+Firstly, we determine the right review method.
+Secondly, we identify the various works related to \gls{dcdt}'s using various search strings
+(\eg ``Datacenter Digital Twinning'', ``ICT Virtual Twin'').
+To search for the results we use the digital libraries of Google Scholar, DBLP, ACM Digital Library, IEEExplore, Springer \etc
+Thirdly, we select work relevant to our research and organize the details of each article.
+A potential outcome of this could be a system model for \gls{dcdt}'s.
+We envision the literature review can supply us with potential use-cases for the predictive \gls{dcdt}.
+Based on the found use-cases, we formulate the functional and non-functional requirements for the predictive \gls{dcdt} reference architecture.
 
 To answer \emph{RQ\textsubscript{2}} we closely follow the \textit{AtLarge Design Process} \cite{DBLP:conf/icdcs/IosupVTETBFMT19} under the guidance of the supervisor, and propose a simulation-based \gls{dcdt} system that meets the requirements listed as a part of  \emph{RQ\textsubscript{1}}.
 Firstly, following the literature review, we list the functional and non-functional requirements of a predictive \gls{dcdt}.